Margaret Maze Craig,
1951, Thomas Y. Crowell
“I wonder,” Pat said suddenly, and the tone of her voice was an odd combination of resentment and wistfulness, “how it would feel to be Connie Hyde.”
High school seniors Patricia Ingram and her best friend Mary Jo Tucker are not popular. They’re not unpopular – Pat has a lovelorn male neighbor she doesn’t want, and neither girl is an outcast - but they want more. At least, Pat does. She’s spent her high school career existing on the fringe of the effortless cool clique run by sleek, poised girls like the famous Connie, and she wants that world. Mary Jo, slightly wiser, suggests there might be aspects to that world Pat hasn’t considered, but Pat has a big reason to ignore this advice – she’s in love with a boy from that group.
Dick Keating – tall, rugged senior. Stubby, biscuit-brown hair and short, thick eyelashes of the same incredible color. Hazel eyes. Lips a trifle full perhaps, but lips that turned up engagingly at the corners when he smiled. Very white teeth, just a little crooked. A casual way of wearing clothes, an easy nonchalance of manner. Dick Keating – the central figure in all her daydreams, and Connie Hyde’s exclusive property!
A chance meeting draws Dick’s attention to the slightly innocent Pat, and the novelty of a girl who isn’t smooth and jaded keeps his interest. Astonished, Pat is thrilled to begin dating him. From the start, though, she’s never sure where she stands with Dick, or how he’s going to fall between his interest in her unsophisticated charms and the allure of the familiar Connie. Later, she begins to see that his interest in her has awakened something else in him, a possibility that he might not just love her but that he might be able to change into the person she thought he was – a boy with values like her own, rather than a boy from a social group that to Pat seems racy and vulgar.
And then the book whips around, introduces a college boy with a bad reputation who falls instantly in love with Pat and destroys her relationship with Dick by creating (unwittingly) a situation where it seems they’ve had sex.
The last quarter of the book is jarring, and while the resolution between Pat and her flawed prince was believable, the way the book arrives at that resolution is baffling. Introducing a major character that late, making their relationship that powerful, and writing out Pat’s friends so quickly were all odd choices. Otherwise, a nicely written teen romance.
About the Author
Margaret Maze Craig (1911-1964)
Craig was born and lived in Pennsylvania. She was married and had 2 children, and worked as a home economics teacher.
The dedication reads "For my mother, La Belle Sutton Maze."
Other Books by Author
Three Who Met (1958)
Now That I'm Sixteen (1959)
It Could Happen To Anyone (1961)